Showing posts with label scars. Show all posts
Showing posts with label scars. Show all posts

Thursday, March 14, 2013

Love War Scars


We fighting a love war who will win? Or maybe we just love war is that a sin? Or maybe we can't expose our truest feelings, so instead of talking it out we use war to hold it in. We act as if hate sends its condolences. We shut down all our senses when ever we caught in the moment. The person I loved, I now see as my opponent. Instead of talking to each other we talk to others to go and vent. 


But I ain't gon be caving in. If they wanted me back they'd be breaking backs to come save me and/ if I give up now they'll forever hold that against me. That leave me locked up and bounded and possibly be in enslavement. It's dangerous to not admit you feeling hurt. The pain grow double while your psyche's getting worse. You feeling as if confession is only good for use in church. So now you both awaiting each others apology, who said it first?


Separation's the destination. Not working it out is gonna lead to deprivation. The love is all drained, bones feeling like they maimed. The minute you lose them everyday feel like it rained. What happen to the day you said you catch their grenade? Now you way out there in Mars which your emotions detained. Promising to be with them for years upon years, but can't look at yourself steering clear of all mirrors. 


The bruises now begin to hold value. May not have been physical but hurt comes from all around you. Getting them to admit they were wrong, is about as hard as it is for you to say can't relate to this song. Don't let the sand fall inside that hour glass, reassemble your broken heart even if you glue the glass. Learn from each other's mistake to make it last. There should be no more events where you both reach an impasse.

Insight: Love war, a war between a couple who love each other completely. Many couples face hardships within their relationships and struggle to keep it together. Some couples thrive on the fighting and insults in their relationships. Verse 1 talks about how they will ignore each other as a cry for help. Verse 2 speaks of how one lover wants the other to come after them. Usually this shows that someone does not want the relationship to end. Verse 3 talk about the couple being on the verge of separation. All those decrees about staying together now seem worthless. The last verse talk about hurting one another, both physically and emotionally. It also acknowledges how the reader may, at this point, feel a connection to the song. 

Friday, March 8, 2013

All of Me (8/6/12)

All of Me (8/6/12)


I've given you all of me and this what you do with it. Tell me bout bow ya mad and how you can't go through with it. The girls at the park is lying always talking that foolishness. Don't believe the word of mouth that bullshit is just ludicrous. We supposed to be each others world without me there's no orbit. Take me here as I am to make life with me joyous. If you leave me now you allow my heart to destroy me. Dropping bombs all over me set up the explosive deployment. 

We soar through the sky at nightfall when no ones around, only the sound of are hearts beating limitless in our bound. We hit the ground with thunderous force became lost then was found. With you no obstacle impedes my paths everything is surmount. You hold me together when I'm broken, hold me tight when I'm left open. Able to love me if my body was without care and corrosive. When were together there's an inconsistent flow like the ocean. With you there's no daily limit exceed past regular dosage.

Insight: Written after I started dating my girlfriend on 8/4/12. I knew she was something special. The first paragraph deals with my relationship from before. My ex would believe lies from other people. There are a number of metaphors to describe how bad the situation became. The second paragraph deals with my new relationship. I feel like unable to be without her. She cares for me and I just can't seem to get enough of her care.